Planning, Organising - Writing

The image I chose is: picture i picked
is the one with the people in the bathroom
sink and it looks like there in a pool and having
a cool off and it looks like there at a beach or
having a day off with there kids and doing some stuff.

My Brainstorm/Ideas

• Make it look like there at the pools and have fun with their kids.
• That there with their family and talking with each other. 
• They went there to let there kids have fun in the pool or beach
• and play with other kids there.
• That the kids wanted to go play there less than staying at home.

The purpose of my writing: A description, an explanation, a narrative, to persuade, a recount or a combination of different text formats

Write a maximum of 4 or 5 paragraphs to present your best writing ever!
Think about how you will engage your reader - vivid vocabulary, dazzling dialogue,
detailed descriptions, or a personal point of view!

Start your writing here… today a family  went in their car  to the pools or beach or the sink in the bathroom to have a swim and meet other people with our family. We made it there and then we let our kids out and they got dressed and went to the pool or beach or the bathroom sink and they met some new friends there but they didn't know there name but they were still friends and they all played in the pool or bathroom sink and had races games and other stuff they did in the bathroom sink or pool. They were having a great time while their parents were talking with the other kids parents and they were having a great time to at the pools or bathroom sink the kids were happy to make new friends but then there was a problem with them they were all like but when the pools close or bathroom sink closes we won't see each other again and that's when the kids got sad they were still playing but not that happy because they all are thinking right now that when the pools close they're all gonna be getting ready to go home and then leave their friends that they just met but then the kids parents came up to them all and said to the kids we are all gonna meet up at there house and have a sleepover for some nights and get along with each other and my move in with them to have new friends and mates to keep them in there happy place and not get sad and make it look like they're bored. So after a few weeks they all moved in with them and became friends and a family forever. The end.

Task Description: today in Rm 3 our literacy teacher made 
this work sheet for us to make a story and make it look
 real and this is what i did hope you leave a comment.