sheep dictation
The mother sheep followed me along the path Picking up her pace she realised i was with a Touching Distance of her lam she lit her out of a Loud low blip What What ecode around the paddock the sleepe lam Lifted his head and turned towards us Before turning slowly to to sleep As the Sheep got closer and closer I thought that I should turn and run
Hello my name is Neve and I go to grey main school and i am a year 5
ReplyDeletethis is so cool i wish it had happened to me and also your peas of writing.
what was your favourite part?
Good bye see you soon :-)
Neve